King of the North

To pass along a piece of advice given to me I would suggest taking it out of the "pre" format. The font is hard to read and, as I've seen ...

Through sun licked landscapes she wandered, a luminous form crafted of the most fabulous river pearls, with fine-stranded hair hewn from the blackest ebony. Okay so this sentence confused me. ...

I think I'm going to do this review as I read to make it easier on myself. If I get off track that is why. The last elven village in ...

I liked this bit of background. I don't think it was written as well as your EverWayward pieces, but the information was solid and interesting. For me the writing just ...

I'm going to be very picky on this one; otherwise I wouldn't have anything to say except how great of a writer you are. “Where is she?!” O’mal demanded, for ...

Okay this was very well written. It reminded me a great deal of my friends writing, who I think is incredibly talented. I was captivated from the very beginning, your ...

Brilliant in every meaning of the word. I was completely captivated by the well developed characters (for such a short story) and the plot within itself. It was very nice. ...

Hey! I loved this poem when you posted it on Inkbearers and it still amazes me how good it really is. I agree with the above post by "LovablelittleSock". His ...

The first paragraph = awesome. :smile: It really drew me into the story and kept me reading what little bit was left. The fact that you keep the descriptions and ...

I'm intrigued by this. The story seems original and I like the fact that you don't write in the typical third person pov. Complaints: I'm a little disappointed that you ...

Another very good poem. To repeat those above you do have a few spelling errors and grammatical problems. Other than that the poem was extremely well written. Stanzas 2 and ...

I liked this. I agree with those above, the beginning was a lot stronger than the ending. I think one factor to this is that the last stanza is something ...